Joseph T. Renaldi

Freshman - 528 Points (Frackville, Pennsylvania)

A Brief Relationship - Poem by Joseph T. Renaldi

We met nonchalantly at a mall,
Both shy and reserved at the start,
But other brief encounters came later
And overwhelmed my heart.

There is a relationship a man may botch
And moments where he often will try
To bid adieu with ardent kisses,
Express love and say good-bye.

We met nonchalantly at a mall,
Now with unfulfilled desire depart,
For I must move with undue haste
To overtake my heavy heart.

Comments about A Brief Relationship by Joseph T. Renaldi

  • Rookie - 165 Points Romeo Della Valle (10/8/2011 6:47:00 PM)

    A first sight love that vanished so fast but it was so huge the impact that stayed stamped in your mind! Beautiful! 10+++ I am very impressed with your knowledgeable background! My great admiration for you! Keep inspiring the World with more such talented writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Karla Bardanza (2/24/2009 10:56:00 PM)

    Sad end for a love that could come into bloom! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 24, 2009

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