A Bride Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

A Bride

Rating: 5.0


I am living with smile
Along with lot of bail
And like a small child
In a world of care
With my old birth pair

Its my home for age
I played in that cage
With a lot of gage
Also made me a sage
So its not just a page

It gave me a name
It showed me a aim
Also thought me a game
That made me a dame
Then my marriage came

And gave me new name
Showed me a new aim
Changed the rules of game
Life is no longer same
My past life looks tame

New life act like a sage
My old life is not page
Don't tear it with rage
Read it carefully for age
Its a wish of a bride

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 09 March 2009

A bride always wish for a happy and healthy life...past is a past and we are there to live anew with your lucky bride....10+++++++

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Stephanie Souter 10 March 2009

verry verry nicely corected. i like this poem so much more. wonderful job

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Anthony Edmond John 10 March 2009

Kranthi ur lines are melodious wth ryhmes..and I love the mention of the sage. cheers. The Sage

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 14 March 2009

Nice write. I liked it.

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very good poem for recitation as well.

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 May 2009

wish all your aims will come true....well expressed indeed..i like the flow of your words..very moving 10++

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Kesav Easwaran 26 April 2009

starting a dual life...transition to the latter stage will happen only slowly...meaningful write, Kranthi...10

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Indira Renganathan 24 March 2009

Interestingly a rhyming wish....good poem10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 March 2009

full of briliancy of rhymes! I love it. keep writing!

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