A Break Up Poem by Monica CruzHerbert

A Break Up

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Pain is growing like a vine pulling and wrapping around my heart
When I think the worst is over
That's when the pain really starts

Someone says your name
Somedays I don't feel a thing
But then there are days like today
Ugh, when it feels I am suffocating


Sometimes it feels like our relationship has been dead and gone
And it starts to rain outside, the hurt I feel is too much bare
The pain has me by the neck and I can't breath, I'm suffocating. 

I find myself wishing I was outside your house
Sitting in my car in your drive way 
My hands frozen on the wheel
And I can feel your love overwhelm me and I start suffocating. 

The memories of what use to be, cuts me to the core
The loneliness starts rolling in like a bad thunderstorm
My strength starts swaying away, I can't move,
it's such a paralyzing state and I start to suffocate...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Monica Herbert 20 August 2011

Thank you David. Break ups are brutal. I could write a book on pain and break ups. Ugh.

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David Joel Rodriguez 20 August 2011

I loathe the feeling... 'Paralyzed' would be the perfect name for this piece. Nice work! David

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