A Brand New Me Poem by mona martinez

A Brand New Me

Rating: 2.6


look at me,
what can you see?
a girl living her dream,
fighting through pain,
just to be her best,
that all she can do,
forget what people say,
they don't know me,
or what i want,
why should they choose?
it's not their life,
SO BACK OFF! ! ! !
let a girl do her thing,
because i freakin sick of labels,
that used to defind who i am,
well guess what?
that not me,
try and put me down,
because your $#! t,
don't work on me,
cuz you see this,
IT'S A BRAND NEW ME! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Copyright © 2009
3-31-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Twilight By The River 08 April 2009

i love it, that is what i really want you to believe in

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=Donna Oliver 14 August 2009

You go girl! Your poem has a very strong message, one that I personally can really relate to. Keep up the good work :)

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Angel Wings 27 April 2009

i love this it is a awesome poem 10: -)

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 14 April 2009

this is an outstanding poem! magnificent work!

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i agree with you my friend. be yourself.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Deva De Silva 08 April 2009

I like the new you... a good read! Thanks, Deva

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