Persian Nightingale


A Brace Of Budgies - Poem by Persian Nightingale

Without you
I'm a rain race
The cloud in the spring
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Comments about A Brace Of Budgies by Persian Nightingale

  • Rookie - 346 Points Guy Lip-more (10/15/2013 4:20:00 PM)

    Very romantic, short but deep (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,305 Points Patricia Grantham (5/12/2013 3:56:00 PM)

    A very romantic poem that touches the heart dearly.
    Such sweet words that softens the hard headed!
    Thanks for a lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,818 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/4/2009 1:46:00 PM)

    'In the red dream of your kiss'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jihad T (1/17/2009 11:26:00 PM)

    rain, cloud, island and sea
    if a poem has one of those it could be good
    what do you think it a poem has all of those?
    8++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie sumaira .....ir (1/7/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    Ths poem is so soft and gentle... LOVELYYY! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (9/1/2008 2:14:00 PM)

    Very touching and gentle support, just a nightingale can sing a song... 10.............
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (8/26/2008 3:46:00 AM)

    You have a lovely way with words Nightingale and your poetry sings,10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (8/19/2008 11:00:00 AM)

    Lovely feeligs lovely expressions! ! !
    sathya narayana (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M M (8/19/2008 7:55:00 AM)

    A very lovely love poem, where feelings can be 'touched' by the reader.10+, of course :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/18/2008 1:29:00 PM)

    ...a 10 has been given to nightingle of shiraz with joy for this nice composition! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (8/18/2008 11:14:00 AM)

    Without 'YOU', nothing you are, living without meaning, floating alone in the ocean of love and life...........lovely indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tanya Stanford (8/18/2008 4:03:00 AM)

    Lovely way to express to someone how they complete you. Lovely written. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (8/18/2008 12:13:00 AM)

    Without her you are alone, with an empty heart you carry, a 'red dream' - you'll never own
    Great read Shiraz! *10*! !
    Friend Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kris Smith (8/17/2008 3:30:00 PM)

    A very moving write enjoyed the softness of your pen and the harmony of your words thankyou Chris 10 (Report) Reply










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