Persian Nightingale


A brace of budgies


Without you
I'm a rain race
The cloud in the spring
An island in the embrace of the sea
Without you
There is no place
All windows are closed
So gray, the sun's face
After years of chasing
I just got a part
In the red dream of your kiss
The last grace

(2008/8/17)

Submitted: Sunday, August 17, 2008
Edited: Thursday, August 21, 2008

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  • Veteran Poet - 2,584 Points Patricia Grantham (5/12/2013 3:56:00 PM)

    A very romantic poem that touches the heart dearly.
    Such sweet words that softens the hard headed!
    Thanks for a lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jihad T (1/17/2009 11:26:00 PM)

    rain, cloud, island and sea
    if a poem has one of those it could be good
    what do you think it a poem has all of those?
    8++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (9/1/2008 2:14:00 PM)

    Very touching and gentle support, just a nightingale can sing a song... 10.............
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M M (8/19/2008 7:55:00 AM)

    A very lovely love poem, where feelings can be 'touched' by the reader.10+, of course :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (8/18/2008 11:14:00 AM)

    Without 'YOU', nothing you are, living without meaning, floating alone in the ocean of love and life...........lovely indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (8/18/2008 12:13:00 AM)

    Without her you are alone, with an empty heart you carry, a 'red dream' - you'll never own
    Great read Shiraz! *10*! !
    Friend Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kris Smith (8/17/2008 3:30:00 PM)

    A very moving write enjoyed the softness of your pen and the harmony of your words thankyou Chris 10 (Report) Reply

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