Persian Nightingale


A Brace Of Budgies - Poem by Persian Nightingale

Without you
I'm a rain race
The cloud in the spring
An island in the embrace of the sea
Without you
There is no place
All windows are closed
So gray, the sun's face
After years of chasing
I just got a part
In the red dream of your kiss
The last grace

(2008/8/17)


Comments about A Brace Of Budgies by Persian Nightingale

  • Rookie - 290 Points Guy Lip-more (10/15/2013 4:20:00 PM)

    Very romantic, short but deep (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,653 Points Patricia Grantham (5/12/2013 3:56:00 PM)

    A very romantic poem that touches the heart dearly.
    Such sweet words that softens the hard headed!
    Thanks for a lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/4/2009 1:46:00 PM)

    'In the red dream of your kiss'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jihad T (1/17/2009 11:26:00 PM)

    rain, cloud, island and sea
    if a poem has one of those it could be good
    what do you think it a poem has all of those?
    8++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie sumaira .....ir (1/7/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    Ths poem is so soft and gentle... LOVELYYY! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (9/1/2008 2:14:00 PM)

    Very touching and gentle support, just a nightingale can sing a song... 10.............
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (8/26/2008 3:46:00 AM)

    You have a lovely way with words Nightingale and your poetry sings,10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (8/19/2008 11:00:00 AM)

    Lovely feeligs lovely expressions! ! !
    sathya narayana (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M M (8/19/2008 7:55:00 AM)

    A very lovely love poem, where feelings can be 'touched' by the reader.10+, of course :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/18/2008 1:29:00 PM)

    ...a 10 has been given to nightingle of shiraz with joy for this nice composition! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (8/18/2008 11:14:00 AM)

    Without 'YOU', nothing you are, living without meaning, floating alone in the ocean of love and life...........lovely indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tanya Stanford (8/18/2008 4:03:00 AM)

    Lovely way to express to someone how they complete you. Lovely written. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (8/18/2008 12:13:00 AM)

    Without her you are alone, with an empty heart you carry, a 'red dream' - you'll never own
    Great read Shiraz! *10*! !
    Friend Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kris Smith (8/17/2008 3:30:00 PM)

    A very moving write enjoyed the softness of your pen and the harmony of your words thankyou Chris 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 21, 2008


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