A Borrowed Song Poem by Shiv Kumar Batalvi

A Borrowed Song

Rating: 5.0


Give me, O Lord
A few more songs.
My fire is dying,
Give me a spark.
At a very young age
I exhausted every sorrow.
For my youth
Give me a fresh pain.

Give me a song, like youth itself,
Beautiful, magical.
Like the redness of a rising day
That sparkles in a brimming lake.
Like the first star of the evening
That shines in a treeless desert.

Night is approaching my desert,
Give me a star or two,
Or let me sink, like the evening redness,
Into the brimming lake.

Lord, life is unbearable without a companion,
Unbearable without a song.
We all know that life has to be lived,
That pain has been sewn into it.
Do the deer drink the water
At every shore?
Let the water at my shore
Be washed away, undrunk.
Or take back the songs
That you let me write.

Lord, we should never extol beauty
Which is empty of fire,
Nor praise those eyes
Whose tears lack salt.
We should not sing a song bereft of pain,
Or write a word devoid of fragrance.
If my words are without fragrance
Tear them from the branch,
Or give me another song,
Like youth itself.

At a very young age
I exhausted every sorrow.
For my youth
Give me a fresh pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhoomika Jain 19 March 2019

Touching emission of pain that a heart like him must be going through, with amazing metaphors.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 October 2021

Congratulations to the close family for being honoured as The Modern Poem Of The Day

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 October 2021

A Borrowed Song, a great poem full of melancholy and great sadness and greatest pain.5 Full Stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 October 2021

True sad poem full of melancholy, this poem is not metaphored, the sufferings had been true. Poor great world famous poet, died too young 35 years young

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Chinedu Dike 16 October 2021

An insightful creation....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 October 2021

A beautiful and deeply moving poem embellished with compelling images and wonderful metaphors.

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Shiv Kumar Batalvi

Shiv Kumar Batalvi

Punjab / British India
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