A Boat-Ride, Surreal Poem by indira babbellapati
A Boat-Ride, Surreal
there, there...down there
through a thicket of fog
beckoned a vacant boat
i fought through the fog
and reached a zone, misty
the boat pulled me as if
i were a piece of iron
i hastened through
the layers and layers...
there i was, at last
assured that it would
take me to the other bank
it wasn't to be
the gently rocking boat
began on an erratic sail
down down the stream
in its womb of deception
hid many a whirlpool
the waters jerky...
hey, what was i doing
sitting in a boat with no oars
nor knowing how to swim...!
'you're the boatman
you're the oars...
row row...
the other bank
a distant dream
row row...'
a song filled the stream...
18dec2009
0540hra
You capture the readers' interest until the very end in this surreal piece...good write Indira.
May I too join you in your boat ride. I can take the oars.
so soothing....so beautiful..............................
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 10:50:42 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Real dreaming in spate of words....no doubt that you're an adept at surrealistic poetry..exciting...thanks a lot