Amanda May Moore

Rookie (May 21,1988 / Ypsilanti Michigan)

A Blank Canvas - Poem by Amanda May Moore

Blank. that is how I feel.
I have no emotions to fulfill.
Nothing left.
I'm bereft.
Of your touch.
No color on your brush.
So I am blank.
That is no paint.
The colors have died.
And yet I survived.
But empty I am.
Yet again I am...
A Blank Canvas.

Comments about A Blank Canvas by Amanda May Moore

  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (8/27/2015 7:53:00 AM)

    Well written, Amanda. Congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 46,883 Points Edward Kofi Louis (8/27/2015 4:12:00 AM)

    Nothing left in life! With the muse of survival. Nice work (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,816 Points Ramesh T A (8/27/2015 3:13:00 AM)

    Emotionless heart is a blank canvas without any colour being used to produce picture! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (12/6/2008 8:48:00 AM)

    You write your poetry from the heart and it is full of your feelings. That is the kind of poetry I find worth reading. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Fischer (6/17/2008 5:09:00 PM)

    Good write...I like how you used painting (or a lack there of in this case) as an analogy to describe your feelings of emptiness. We've all been there before...we've all experienced a void in our people can definitely relate to it. You also kept it short and simple. Nice work...Top marks!
    -Michael (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Issam Hal (8/15/2007 6:34:00 PM)

    hi amanda so nice and tnx for this poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,993 Points Melvina Germain (7/15/2007 8:17:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem, complex yet one can find symplicity here. A blank canvas waiting to be fulfilled, a blank canvas, not but will. I like the abstract flare to it. A big (10) from me, Excellent Amanda.--Melvina-- (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Pennington (7/9/2007 6:31:00 PM)

    I hope I could be the color in your life! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points JoAnn McGrath (6/29/2007 8:12:00 PM)

    I like this.....even though it portrays being left the reader with hope beacuse a blank canvas can become anything.....nice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 26, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 17, 2011

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