Juan Olivarez

Freshman - 774 Points (september 12 / nyssa oregon)

A Black Cloud (Haiku) - Poem by Juan Olivarez

A black cloud pregnant,
With rain, drifting o'r the land,
Brings joy once again.

3/20/11 Alton Texas


Comments about A Black Cloud (Haiku) by Juan Olivarez

  • Bronze Star - 2,929 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (5/4/2014 10:12:00 PM)

    Awesome piece and so profound in vivid images. Brilliant example of haiku. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Claudia Krizay (9/24/2011 12:14:00 PM)

    this one makes you think but when one thinks hard enough, it makes a lot of sense, just like when birth its given, to many people, it brings joy again (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (8/16/2011 8:55:00 PM)

    well done... in step with the natural! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,319 Points Smoky Hoss (4/2/2011 1:35:00 PM)

    Succinctly beautiful words of natures bounty. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, April 1, 2011


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