A Black Cloud (Haiku) Poem by Juan Olivarez

A Black Cloud (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


A black cloud pregnant,
With rain, drifting o'r the land,
Brings joy once again.

3/20/11 Alton Texas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 May 2014

Awesome piece and so profound in vivid images. Brilliant example of haiku.

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Claudia Krizay 24 September 2011

this one makes you think but when one thinks hard enough, it makes a lot of sense, just like when birth its given, to many people, it brings joy again

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Eric Cockrell 16 August 2011

well done... in step with the natural!

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Smoky Hoss 02 April 2011

Succinctly beautiful words of natures bounty.

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