A Black Box Poem by john tiong chunghoo

A Black Box

Rating: 4.0


somewhere in my frame
a black box that clocks
my every heartbeat
every wink of the eyes
every single hair that sprouts
but sadistically conceals
all the vital numbers from me

somewhere in my frame
a black box that counts
every of my pores
everybody i am going to meet
and the exact second i am going
to kick the bucket but allows not a single
shard of light to escape the stasis, the black hole

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 16 October 2007

Everyone got a black box.... a soul! It may represent also a conscience which dictates which is good or bad. Thanks bro, top marks.

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David Blake 14 October 2007

Nice poem I give it a 10. Ty for your work.

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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