A Big Surprise Poem by Maria Barbara Korynt

A Big Surprise

Rating: 5.0


thought that it was a sweet bird
chick, darling baby
therefore very much firmly
he was surprised
when he felt a claw
of the lion, at dawn...

when everyone lied dormant
in feather quilts
to the garden he dashed off jauntily
but he didn't hear
and no longer he will hear
so that somebody loudly applauds him

before him an gate is slammed shut
and somewhere he lost
keys on the way
he got into a panic, when he saw
tracks of the lion
and he became, scared sorely

because it was
a lioness zodiacal
beauty, nice,
but unpredictable,
she also had the key to the garden
and she didn't forget it at all

she threw the key away somewhere into the distance
saying in addition - for me sorrow isn't
and who will find the key to the garden
the one he will try delicious honey
and it doesn't walk here about 'small pocket'
and certainly not for none 'money box'

I will give the SECRET
away for you friends
needed small
what well is hitting
thanks to it every man
lives :)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 31 August 2009

nice swirling poem Barbara..........good imagery and flow

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ngaio beck 29 August 2009

Until I discovered your work, I thought I understood English.

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fantastic tale in poetic form, works well.10 for this

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Dagmara Anna 24 May 2009

It is a very good satire. It is worthwhile reading. :) DA

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