Maria Barbara Korynt

A Bewitchment - Poem by Maria Barbara Korynt

depth of your eyes
attract me as the magnet
and I am drowning
in them
I am drowning
therefore you
in this way
don't look at me

your lips are full
of bizarre words
and sweet love words
it is object of dreams
not only my

you are saying,
that I have eyes
as two oceans
and you love me
and you want
to be loved
you are


it is close

you can have



Comments about A Bewitchment by Maria Barbara Korynt

  • Rookie - 20 Points Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (1/31/2010 9:58:00 AM)

    First half of the poem is superb but the last part something is missing.....Sorry, dont be angry..
    U write other poems. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,778 Points C. P. Sharma (1/3/2010 1:19:00 AM)

    Bewitching words with captivating weave.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,834 Points Ken E Hall (12/11/2009 2:24:00 PM)

    A bewitching poem love can be such a pull on the heart strings
    as to surrender+++++10
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,245 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/7/2009 3:43:00 PM)

    'And you love me affectionately
    and you want
    to be loved '

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 569 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (8/9/2009 9:24:00 AM)

    i am drowning
    therefore you
    in this way
    don't look at me................
    lave dazzles like rainbow by colors
    eyes raves up to the luscious glow
    moon bewitches ocean to wave
    still it hides in dark to hold tide, ...........wonderfully curved over rock of love bewitching the beholders, yetb ingenious through imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/7/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    Something that we need, a real authentic kind of love, like a kind of magic! Good piece indeed Maria. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 190 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (8/1/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    i want my wife to tell me that......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dagmara Anna (7/29/2009 3:59:00 PM)

    Delicate, sensitive and romantic.Shapely written.
    Very much I like it. :)) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 30, 2009

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