A Better Place Poem by Faith Elizabeth Brigham

A Better Place

Rating: 4.1


my heart is strongly set
to do what good i can do
and when i leave this world
i hope to have made a difference
to have made the world
a better place in my own way
even if it is in a small way
by having tried to be kind
to all whose path has crossed mine
by treating others with respect
helping those in need of encouragement
to reach their goals
or perhaps by writing something
that helps someone in some fashion
if i have accomplished this
then i have completed my souls work

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 31 December 2005

I believe you've touched many with your words Faith. You are a wonderful lady. Sincerely, Mary

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Jodie Hardy 27 August 2013

Beautiful poem, I hope the same. X

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Nimal Dunuhinga 13 May 2006

I wish this fragrant flower will bloom in a 'Better place'. In this HUMAN SOIL never grows love? . A very touching poem Elizabeth.

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Duncan Wyllie 09 April 2006

The Love has certainly been spread from this one, I would like to see this one written in stone and placed in the centre of everyones heart.An absolute 10 from me.Love duncan

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Kee Thampi 13 January 2006

your poem is nicely choked for reading a wonderful vision may keep writing more for us thamp55@yahoo.co.uk nice day thampi

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Not Long Left 31 December 2005

i agree with Mary you have definatly touched my heart with your words and inspired my soul, a fine poem. yours sincerly Vincent

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham

Faith Elizabeth Brigham

Pittsburgh, PA
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