Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 185 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

***a Beautiful Talent (Must Read) *** - Poem by Vishal Sharma

We are well placed in the mighty arms
of the human spirits
To spell out the reason how to get the
universe explored
We have a changed the dogma of the
pure religions and assets
Though,
A hungry lust to get all the
existing power churn our minds.

Selfless human flesh wandering the
quest of answers of all powers Sweat of
labor and hard blood rains do miracles
We are surrounded by the beautiful
demons of human ability too
We put the world at the edge of the
earth and we put our mind there.

Our own habits have a talent too gasp
the whole world into our fist
And we
are lucky to get such an honour by the
almighty soul
We burned our passion to burn the
lights and candles
Yes, we are at our best to make the
world a worthy place to live.

We are talented, we make rumours and
burn people
We make surprises and we destruct our
own nests
We the mighty power, an honest
servant
We have the potential to change the
world, only with the bare hands.......! ! ! !


Comments about ***a Beautiful Talent (Must Read) *** by Vishal Sharma

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/26/2014 10:41:00 AM)

    A true and satirical rhyme.........
    Why won't raise our hands for humanity, rather than turning to selfish pleasures.........
    A true and evocative write (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 781 Points V P Mahur (3/15/2014 10:41:00 AM)

    Dear Vishal,
    Undoubtedly man has a unique talent but his over enthusiasm has created so many problem to our Mother Nature. Lovely Poem This one.

    I invite you to read my poems and send your views. you Can try this one:

    210. Truth of Creation
    What will be the future
    Of the nation
    If the people keep their attention
    Towards only one direction
    If only a wheel is cared
    The other wheel is punctured
    And the chariot
    Of the country
    Will go in the dust
    .......................
    ..........................
    I am Waiting for your response.
    Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (3/7/2014 11:50:00 AM)

    its so nice to read such good poems from a poet like you, a well build piece with strong base well done dear (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Sadvansha Munshi (3/5/2014 5:06:00 PM)

    A great poem.. nicely done..! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,201 Points Shahzia Batool (3/5/2014 4:16:00 AM)

    A potent write up with an implicit ironical strain running throughout the poem, to make the humans realize their might...and to make them think if they can do negative, then they can certainly use their positive approach in power to give the world a nice change...i like the parenthetical command...thx brother! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Tripsha Ghosh (3/5/2014 1:37:00 AM)

    Nyc 1 to read it's a gud poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/4/2014 10:54:00 PM)

    let us build a new world, my dear poet, with all love all truth that are with us. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 4, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 5, 2014


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