A Beautiful Morning? (C) 4-23-2010 Poem by Zahir Kijani

A Beautiful Morning? (C) 4-23-2010

Rating: 3.7


Oh what a beautiful grey sky
What I thought was a beautiful day
I freakin thought I could frolic through flowers
But I guess that went away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jodie Scott 04 May 2010

Short but sweet, i like it :) xx

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Lora Pettit 05 May 2010

i like this its really awesome

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Katherine Wheatley 06 May 2010

real kl! short nd swet haha!

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Ibrahim Bidu 01 October 2010

Wow! Short, powerful!

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Ujjol Kamal 31 May 2010

nice work keep writing keep growing

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Ken E Hall 28 May 2010

Funny beaut day but sure not long enough but the humour saved the day uavanice1 regards

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Moonbee Canady 24 May 2010

Corey, This One Made Me S M I L E! (and Haven't We All Experienced What It Said) ... Good One... MoonBee

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Alfred Cawe 06 May 2010

You should extol yourself for this poem....It's short but the message is 'LONG'.....I like the fact that u did not waste words...Thnx 4 sharing

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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