Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 8,016 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

A Beautiful Mask Of Smile! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

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Who has not crossed the bridge of,
Pile of emotions keeps on flickering,
Day and night like the beautiful stars,
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Comments about A Beautiful Mask Of Smile! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Freshman - 757 Points Uma Ram (4/8/2015 11:52:00 PM)

    Awesome mam..........beautifully portrayed. Like a birdie trapped inside a cage..., very true mam. Loved reading it. Free flow of words, spontaneously. Loved it mam. Thanks for your valuable appreciation of my poem, Beauty...felt motivated mam. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 544 Points Silvi Tripathy (4/8/2015 6:31:00 AM)

    Awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,964 Points Kee Thampi (4/8/2015 6:16:00 AM)

    when again sunshines and love will make us lovable to Him (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,780 Points Abdulrazak Aralimatti (3/23/2015 4:47:00 AM)

    A very good description of life. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,506 Points Saheb Mohapatra (11/2/2014 1:58:00 AM)

    a nice poem........the title too is heart-touching........thanks (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,909 Points Soulful Heart (10/27/2014 9:48:00 AM)

    so true......the mask are so varied in todays world.....ur poem reminds me of gabriel okara's once upon a time though at different level.....10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,276 Points Amitava Sur (8/29/2014 2:55:00 AM)

    A very pragmatic write, Geetha. Barring a few most of us are actually masking our sorrows and pains under our fabricated smiling face. But if we don't do that, we'd have been died much earlier under the pressure of sorrows.Hence this mask of smile is of immense value to keep us alive.... well done my dear. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,323 Points Khalida Bano Ali (8/21/2014 9:51:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, it deserved to be poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,960 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 12:54:00 PM)

    Yes we walk with painted smiles..........Geetha............and none can know what lies inside as one living a volcano
    life may explode any time................... great write Geetha a must 10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,674 Points Soumita Sarkar (6/25/2014 12:59:00 AM)

    A veil of smile..........a mask of smile can hide all disparity all disfigured imagery of this mundane life.......the lines at the end raised hope a bit! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Vijay Sai R (6/20/2014 5:43:00 AM)

    a man who laughs all the time certainly has a hard heart which is really hard to break.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,759 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/12/2014 8:03:00 PM)

    When a reader starts thinking that this poem is written for me, the poet is certified to be great. As an insignificant reader I certify that you are a great poetess. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,192 Points Tiku . (4/24/2014 10:36:00 AM)

    beautiful poem.somewhat related.reading again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Yash Shinde (3/28/2014 11:14:00 PM)

    ....a feel like reading this piece ever n ever again, you have used beautiful example of a weeping bird, its great how humans are able to hide their true emotion under a smile....lovely poem mam.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,909 Points Soulful Heart (3/17/2014 5:21:00 AM)

    You took the words straight from my heart.......true to the letter n beautifuly put (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Yash Shinde (3/16/2014 2:35:00 PM)

    highly motivating........actually somewhat paradoxical, ..............gud wrk from your side....... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,634 Points Salini Nair (2/5/2014 1:42:00 AM)

    good concept...liked it.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nirvaan Babbar (1/30/2014 3:28:00 AM)

    nice one............ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jay Gandhi (1/23/2014 7:07:00 AM)

    The first line seems incomplete.
    bridge of, (of what)
    If you want me to run through the second line in accordance with first, I am unable to fulfill the right tense.
    This poem is lovely. The parallels you draw about the caged bird and the joker in the circus are a bit cliche but they work wonderfully well over here. especially the one about the joker. I liked the poem a lot. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/4/2014 7:33:00 PM)

    Overflowing with optimism. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply










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