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Geetha Jayakumar

Bronze Star - 5,285 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

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A Beautiful Mask of Smile!


Who has not crossed the bridge of,
Pile of emotions keeps on flickering,
Day and night like the beautiful stars,
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  • Silver Star - 9,460 Points Soulful Heart (10/27/2014 9:48:00 AM)

    so true......the mask are so varied in todays world.....ur poem reminds me of gabriel okara's once upon a time though at different level.....10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,557 Points Amitava Sur (8/29/2014 2:55:00 AM)

    A very pragmatic write, Geetha. Barring a few most of us are actually masking our sorrows and pains under our fabricated smiling face. But if we don't do that, we'd have been died much earlier under the pressure of sorrows.Hence this mask of smile is of immense value to keep us alive.... well done my dear. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,527 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 12:54:00 PM)

    Yes we walk with painted smiles..........Geetha............and none can know what lies inside as one living a volcano
    life may explode any time................... great write Geetha a must 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 779 Points Soumita Sarkar (6/25/2014 12:59:00 AM)

    A veil of smile..........a mask of smile can hide all disparity all disfigured imagery of this mundane life.......the lines at the end raised hope a bit! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Vijay Sai R (6/20/2014 5:43:00 AM)

    a man who laughs all the time certainly has a hard heart which is really hard to break.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,891 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/12/2014 8:03:00 PM)

    When a reader starts thinking that this poem is written for me, the poet is certified to be great. As an insignificant reader I certify that you are a great poetess. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Yash Shinde (3/28/2014 11:14:00 PM)

    ....a feel like reading this piece ever n ever again, you have used beautiful example of a weeping bird, its great how humans are able to hide their true emotion under a smile....lovely poem mam.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Yash Shinde (3/16/2014 2:35:00 PM)

    highly motivating........actually somewhat paradoxical, ..............gud wrk from your side....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jay Gandhi (1/23/2014 7:07:00 AM)

    The first line seems incomplete.
    bridge of, (of what)
    If you want me to run through the second line in accordance with first, I am unable to fulfill the right tense.
    This poem is lovely. The parallels you draw about the caged bird and the joker in the circus are a bit cliche but they work wonderfully well over here. especially the one about the joker. I liked the poem a lot. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,285 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/2/2014 6:09:00 AM)

    Thank you Lyn for the beautiful comments. Sure Lyn you can save in your heart and in your site too.
    IF... my words can make you smile and bring happiness then there is nothing like that. Yes, you can definitely fight sadness. Yes, I will never forget Mask...Thanks... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,339 Points Lyn Paul (12/31/2013 9:06:00 PM)

    You have given me 2 wonderful gifts today Geetha. The 1st is this beautiful write I will save in my heart and on my site. The other gift were your words that truly touched my heart on my page on this new day at a time when my life has changed and I am fighting sadness BUT I know I can fight it and there are so many who are struggling more.
    Thank you so, so much Geetha and don't ever forget your MASK x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 378 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (9/24/2013 3:00:00 AM)

    Be careful with the mask you wear
    Lest it gets stuck like second skin
    And the pain gets too much to bear
    But fight it out bare and you will win...

    (Good poem - Keep writing) (Report) Reply

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