Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,259 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

A Beautiful Mask Of Smile! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Who has not crossed the bridge of,
Pile of emotions keeps on flickering,
Day and night like the beautiful stars,
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Comments about A Beautiful Mask Of Smile! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 8,332 Points Bharati Nayak (8/8/2015 5:51:00 AM)

    A beautiful write on Smile, that masks our all other emotions to give an impression of our gentle behaviour.No one can see our pain, suffering, anger or hatred.We hide under the facade of our smile and show that every thing is O.K. with us.There also comes a time when we leave that guard and come out open with our real feelings- - pain, suffering, love, hatred or anger. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 613 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/17/2015 9:26:00 PM)

    Contradictory emotions well put here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 302 Points Rajagopalan Kumar (5/26/2015 7:14:00 AM)

    Good depiction of truth; (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,500 Points Uma Ram (4/8/2015 11:52:00 PM)

    Awesome mam..........beautifully portrayed. Like a birdie trapped inside a cage..., very true mam. Loved reading it. Free flow of words, spontaneously. Loved it mam. Thanks for your valuable appreciation of my poem, Beauty...felt motivated mam. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 585 Points Silvi Tripathy (4/8/2015 6:31:00 AM)

    Awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,136 Points Kee Thampi (4/8/2015 6:16:00 AM)

    when again sunshines and love will make us lovable to Him (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,548 Points Abdulrazak Aralimatti (3/23/2015 4:47:00 AM)

    A very good description of life. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,514 Points Saheb Mohapatra (11/2/2014 1:58:00 AM)

    a nice poem........the title too is heart-touching........thanks (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,962 Points Soulful Heart (10/27/2014 9:48:00 AM)

    so true......the mask are so varied in todays world.....ur poem reminds me of gabriel okara's once upon a time though at different level.....10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,233 Points Amitava Sur (8/29/2014 2:55:00 AM)

    A very pragmatic write, Geetha. Barring a few most of us are actually masking our sorrows and pains under our fabricated smiling face. But if we don't do that, we'd have been died much earlier under the pressure of sorrows.Hence this mask of smile is of immense value to keep us alive.... well done my dear. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,679 Points Khalida Bano Ali (8/21/2014 9:51:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, it deserved to be poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,823 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 12:54:00 PM)

    Yes we walk with painted smiles..........Geetha............and none can know what lies inside as one living a volcano
    life may explode any time................... great write Geetha a must 10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,642 Points Soumita Sarkar (6/25/2014 12:59:00 AM)

    A veil of smile..........a mask of smile can hide all disparity all disfigured imagery of this mundane life.......the lines at the end raised hope a bit! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 58 Points Vijay Sai R (6/20/2014 5:43:00 AM)

    a man who laughs all the time certainly has a hard heart which is really hard to break.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,976 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/12/2014 8:03:00 PM)

    When a reader starts thinking that this poem is written for me, the poet is certified to be great. As an insignificant reader I certify that you are a great poetess. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,655 Points Tiku . (4/24/2014 10:36:00 AM)

    beautiful poem.somewhat related.reading again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (3/28/2014 11:14:00 PM)

    ....a feel like reading this piece ever n ever again, you have used beautiful example of a weeping bird, its great how humans are able to hide their true emotion under a smile....lovely poem mam.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,962 Points Soulful Heart (3/17/2014 5:21:00 AM)

    You took the words straight from my heart.......true to the letter n beautifuly put (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (3/16/2014 2:35:00 PM)

    highly motivating........actually somewhat paradoxical, ..............gud wrk from your side....... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,809 Points Salini Nair (2/5/2014 1:42:00 AM)

    good concept...liked it.... (Report) Reply










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