Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,259 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

A Beautiful Mask Of Smile! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Who has not crossed the bridge of,
Pile of emotions keeps on flickering,
Day and night like the beautiful stars,
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  • Gold Star - 36,157 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (10/5/2015 4:37:00 AM)

    A mask of beautiful smile hides all the pains behind.
    Yes its the mask and only mask plays the beautiful roles............Yes, it is true dictum. So nicely speculated and beautifully depicted on smile throughout life. Many thanks dear madam for saharing such an intensive poem.......10 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 13,175 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (9/14/2015 4:35:00 AM)

    But inside the cage was a weeping bird.
    No one listened her painful cries. finally your hope is put into words. finally a day will come then i will unveil the mask and laugh and shout and cry as i will. thank you for the sense of hope which you are conveying to all the readers. yes so many live with masks. it is a smiling facade that we see everywhere. thank you God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,265 Points Bharati Nayak (8/8/2015 5:51:00 AM)

    A beautiful write on Smile, that masks our all other emotions to give an impression of our gentle behaviour.No one can see our pain, suffering, anger or hatred.We hide under the facade of our smile and show that every thing is O.K. with us.There also comes a time when we leave that guard and come out open with our real feelings- - pain, suffering, love, hatred or anger. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 654 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/17/2015 9:26:00 PM)

    Contradictory emotions well put here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 302 Points Rajagopalan Kumar (5/26/2015 7:14:00 AM)

    Good depiction of truth; (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,513 Points Uma Ram (4/8/2015 11:52:00 PM)

    Awesome mam..........beautifully portrayed. Like a birdie trapped inside a cage..., very true mam. Loved reading it. Free flow of words, spontaneously. Loved it mam. Thanks for your valuable appreciation of my poem, Beauty...felt motivated mam. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 585 Points Silvi Tripathy (4/8/2015 6:31:00 AM)

    Awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,174 Points Kee Thampi (4/8/2015 6:16:00 AM)

    when again sunshines and love will make us lovable to Him (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,024 Points Abdulrazak Aralimatti (3/23/2015 4:47:00 AM)

    A very good description of life. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,514 Points Saheb Mohapatra (11/2/2014 1:58:00 AM)

    a nice poem........the title too is heart-touching........thanks (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,012 Points Soulful Heart (10/27/2014 9:48:00 AM)

    so true......the mask are so varied in todays world.....ur poem reminds me of gabriel okara's once upon a time though at different level.....10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,136 Points Amitava Sur (8/29/2014 2:55:00 AM)

    A very pragmatic write, Geetha. Barring a few most of us are actually masking our sorrows and pains under our fabricated smiling face. But if we don't do that, we'd have been died much earlier under the pressure of sorrows.Hence this mask of smile is of immense value to keep us alive.... well done my dear. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,825 Points Khalida Bano Ali (8/21/2014 9:51:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, it deserved to be poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,275 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 12:54:00 PM)

    Yes we walk with painted smiles..........Geetha............and none can know what lies inside as one living a volcano
    life may explode any time................... great write Geetha a must 10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,953 Points Soumita Sarkar (6/25/2014 12:59:00 AM)

    A veil of smile..........a mask of smile can hide all disparity all disfigured imagery of this mundane life.......the lines at the end raised hope a bit! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 298 Points Vijay Sai R (6/20/2014 5:43:00 AM)

    a man who laughs all the time certainly has a hard heart which is really hard to break.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,795 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/12/2014 8:03:00 PM)

    When a reader starts thinking that this poem is written for me, the poet is certified to be great. As an insignificant reader I certify that you are a great poetess. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,585 Points Tiku . (4/24/2014 10:36:00 AM)

    beautiful poem.somewhat related.reading again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (3/28/2014 11:14:00 PM)

    ....a feel like reading this piece ever n ever again, you have used beautiful example of a weeping bird, its great how humans are able to hide their true emotion under a smile....lovely poem mam.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,012 Points Soulful Heart (3/17/2014 5:21:00 AM)

    You took the words straight from my heart.......true to the letter n beautifuly put (Report) Reply

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