A Beautiful Bonding. Poem by Fay Slimm

A Beautiful Bonding.

Rating: 4.9


As the rose is joined for life to its stem,
Is fed from its root, blazing colour to
All who would look, the bond that is sending
Such beauty into my life is with you.

As we two blossom with colourful love
And together feed from the same hearfelt
Need to reach out and give, desire to prove
Our devotion soars, and tenderly melts
Any small doubts, satisfies us, knowing
That beautiful bonding needs care, feeding
With time and sweet words. Reflecting the glow
Of destiny's banquet, we eat, no need
To resist such fine feast. As the flowers,
Such are we, - bonded, and so powerfully.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 February 2009

The merging of two beings into one, always beautiful...10

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Tom Balch 11 February 2009

A lovely, warm and beautiful write Fay,10 from Tom

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Catrina Heart 11 February 2009

Great opus written with fine metaphors and nice imagery...10+++

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Ravi A 05 April 2009

'That beautiful bonding needs care, feeding With time and sweet words. Reflecting the glow Of destiny's banquet'..., true from the heart, truly said words.

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Sandra Fowler 25 February 2009

A wonderful simile. Roses speak the language of love more eloquently than any other flower. Amd you, my friend, are a poet worthy of the name. As always, Sandra

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C. P. Sharma 14 February 2009

Fay, Poetry sprouts in you. As the flowers mature into fruit, Ripening bonds sweet smell & juice. CP

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Juneil Sechico 12 February 2009

I like this Gal! very sincere and pure! It's a perfect tribute to friends!

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Kevin Wells 11 February 2009

Another masterly piece about the warmth and passion of a loving relationship. Really appreciated the metaphors - all capped off with destiny's feast! No need to ask what is for dessert! ! Kev.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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