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A Beating Soul

As I lie in bed
watching the curtains
blow in and out like
a beating heart
I decide to get up
and close the window

As I get closer
my blood runs cold
and my heart beats faster

The window is already closed

Submitted: Monday, May 28, 2012
Edited: Monday, May 28, 2012


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  • Valsa George (4/4/2014 6:42:00 AM)

    An eerie experience! Through the bizarre movement of the curtain, an extra terrestrial feel is powerfully imparted! Enjoyed!

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  • Stan Petrovich (11/19/2013 4:08:00 PM)

    This is a frightening administration when applied to the world itself. Very good indeed.

  • marvin brato (10/27/2013 7:07:00 AM)

    Interesting expression....quite a suspense!

  • Kalpana Shah (9/10/2013 1:38:00 AM)

    lovely write... poured from a heart

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/22/2013 5:13:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem..Loved reading it..

    Thank you for the beautiful comments for my poem Breaking news...Thanks a lot....

  • Mohabeer Beeharry (8/9/2013 12:58:00 PM)

    I could figure what comes next. Short but absolutely taking..i like it

    Mohabeer Beeharry

  • Gary Kedron (4/16/2013 11:22:00 PM)

    Great poem! ! ! !
    Amazing last verse! ! !
    I thought in my head....

  • Yasmeen Khan (1/10/2013 4:44:00 AM)

    An eerie atmosphere!

  • Smoky Hoss (6/12/2012 7:45:00 AM)

    Interesting... mystical... like it!

  • Sharon Smith (6/4/2012 11:50:00 AM)

    So, where did your thoughts go from there? ?

    Regards...Sharon.

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