Jonathan ROBIN

Rookie - 129 Points (22 September / London)

A Beam of Light


As intuition
sweetens, sweeps senses, doors open
onto fruition.

Bursting bright, baring
intimate enlightenment
links souls insight sharing.

Light weaving laughter
assuages inhibitions,
superfluous hereafter.

Sounds of soft music
reflect starry skies' surprise,
bring belonging magic.

Ecstasy appears
to overwhelm misfortune,
love banishing fears.

Eternally, bliss
personnified, naught denied: -
Song of Songs is this.

Sounds of music
and starry skies
bring belonging magic.

Ecstasy here
lets life blossom,
love knows no fear.

Eternal bliss
is personnified:
Song of Songs is this.

Communication quite
envelops and sustains bridge
building shared delight.

Listening space
endows lasting trust to end
individual race.

Tender light beam bright
translates now to forever
extending insight.

Shared listening space
bears witness to lasting trust
ends ambition’s [t]race.

Submitted: Sunday, October 22, 2006
Edited: Sunday, July 14, 2013

Form:


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

(14 June 1991 revised 20 June 2007)

Comments about this poem (A Beam of Light by Jonathan ROBIN )

Enter the verification code :

  • Rookie Janice M Pickett (4/1/2009 11:26:00 AM)

    Hi Jonathan, Nice to see you again. I have come back here after a 2 year break. Crammed in a serious fall which cost me a knee and now have a slight limp and also went throrugh the dreaded breast cancer with 4 months of treatments. But I am fine and dandy again and back writing poetry. I love this one of yours. it's warm and sweet. It brings comfort and a glow to my heart. Excellent! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 163 Points Prasanna Kumari (12/12/2006 8:30:00 PM)

    although spiritual in the content, this can be applied in different levels to give different meaning...to show how a beam of light can change man's mind, heart, life, creative activity etc... (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. If, Rudyard Kipling
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  6. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  8. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  9. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  10. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost

Poem of the Day

poet Dante Gabriel Rossetti

Your hands lie open in the long fresh grass, --
The finger-points look through like rosy blooms:
Your eyes smile peace. The pasture gleams and glooms
...... Read complete »

   

New Poems

  1. The Shed, Susan Lacovara
  2. Rich and Scared, Poor and Safe!, Charles Jagongo
  3. Love Note 14, Michael P. McParland
  4. My Only Angel 2, Michael P. McParland
  5. Modi Saheb, Bijay Kant Dubey
  6. Inspiration Is Dead In Me, Bijay Kant Dubey
  7. Brothers, Raymond A. Foss
  8. Politician, Asit Kumar Sanyal
  9. My Brother, Raymond A. Foss
  10. If We Ever Meet Again....., Lichu Thomas
[Hata Bildir]