A Beach Romance Poem by mark king

A Beach Romance

Rating: 4.0


We partied, shooting barcardi
Drunken, drained
And filled with love
The full moon lit the way
To our hearts

As the surf touched our toes
We laughed
While we counted
The stars above
Cause it'll take forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

A short and beautiful poem with nice imagery.

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 September 2008

This was prose written as a poem. It would have been a good one too. But it wasn't, though I did give it a recommendation. That is how close it came to being great. GW62

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Joseph Poewhit 04 September 2008

AND - you'll be sober long before the final number

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