A Bare Truth Poem by Romeo Della Valle

You sure are deep. Love this part, 'am unknown and alone, The real one is yet' I enjoy it... I give you a 10.

Yes, has a human beings we go through different stages of ourselves. Not realizing it, people do not reflect on their past selves to see that it has made them who they are today. So when one sits do when one has to think 'is this it or is just a phase' so one just fills empty and unwhole. Insightful I hope this what you the message you are trying to send forth. In any case this is what I percieved.

Truth of ourselves is always inside its the face we present to the world which is not always the truth, like Romeo good always wins over bad...regards

As i rise with the orange glow..... what a statement. You have done well. Keep it up.

Great poem. I love the first line; 'I am in the present perfect'. Well done. Good write.

A very rhythmic poem. It just right. Bien!

It's a lovely depiction of the life as what you painted with pen & paper. A creative way to look at.......I am in the present perfect.............

nice write its very touching its very true... read it 3 times

nice work.........a good insightful poem thumbs up keep writing

I am in the present perfect. Which unlocks or fastens, the door of immortality.