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A Banana Split

Yesterday’s downtown tour
An unexpected downpour
A discarded banana peel
Chance unison with a worn-out heel
Did turn all upside down
Bottom up, lowered crown
Ego shattered, body sore
Thanks to the downpour.

Submitted: Friday, September 27, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 27, 2013

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  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/1/2013 6:33:00 AM)

    Ouch that hurts.
    But I know that a moment like that makes a man sorry and happy at the same time. But I know they are more of the happy side. GGrrr..(laughs)

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  • Hazel Durham (9/27/2013 6:04:00 AM)

    Quirky, sassy and original!

  • Deepak Sawhney (9/27/2013 3:41:00 AM)

    Thanks TK. I just thought of lightening up the sombre mood of a series of serious writing with some light banter :)

  • Tribhawan Kaul (9/27/2013 1:54:00 AM)

    Ego shattered, body sore
    Thanks to the downpour.....well said. Poem says a lot.

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