! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Ballerina Wins My Heart! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Ballerina Wins My Heart! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.5


A beautiful ballerina full of grace
Tip toed on stage, in white lace.
Hair pulled back, a small crown in hair,
Oh, she looked so winsome and fair.

Other day was kicking her tiny legs on bed,
Wearing a tiny bonnet and dress in red.
She crawled in my courtyard on her knees,
She loved all the attention I could see.

Now, here she stood, so poised on stage,
I watched with joy, disbelief and dazed.
Step by step with others she moved on her toes,
Amazing… how fast children learn and grow.

My heart beat fast seeing little Anika dance.
But back in the green room she joyfully pranced.
Kissed her and left to keep another engagement.
Next day, she chided why you missed the final act.

I was looking for you when I made the bow,
Before I could reply she was creating row.
How did she manage to stay quiet and act
All grown up…she will be six next month in fact.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 06 June 2009

You are expert to compose, to present any idea or event in a poetic fashion. In this wonderful poem Anita, six is expressed with your emotion and imagination. It is stunning and touching poem, I love this nice piece.10+++

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Vidi Writes 06 June 2009

'Ballerina' is female ballet dancer of century old ballet. I just love the way this word takes life in this poem The life of life anika, her dance her grace All of her wins the heart like the ballet Ballerina. Wonderful, dear poet This read is just so nice Like watching the Imperial Ballet.

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Sandra Martyres 06 June 2009

Six year old Anita, depicted as a beautiful ballerina - what a lovely image brought out so effectively in this poem Mamta

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Subroto Chatterjee 06 June 2009

Heart-warming stuff which I can empathize... Cheers. Subroto

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Marieta Maglas 07 June 2009

''My heart beat fast seeing little Anika dance. But back in the green room she joyfully pranced. Kissed her and left to keep another engagement. Next day, she chided why you missed the final act.'' beautiful esthetics, wonderful feelings.......10++

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M A 04 August 2009

Nothing like a fiesty little femme fatale in diaphanous floaty tutu. You forget, they are irrestible and sting. Very cutely.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 July 2009

Very tender feelings............so well expressed. The way the narration went on.........seems almost impossible for me..................Great skill in writing such poems

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 June 2009

Beautiful ballet of words. A lovely poem, Mamta. Best Regards Naseer

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premji premji 12 June 2009

mamtaji, you are a ballerina of words.....

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Sandra Fowler 11 June 2009

One must expect a ballerina to be both beautiful and tempermental. Captivating write. Warm regards, Sandra

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