A Bait And I. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

A Bait And I.

Rating: 3.9


In the ocean of passion,
Reason has little liaison,
Fish abound, blink and twinkle,
Splash at the face to bloom and spring,
Constant chanting with airy bubbles,
Enter the nostrils to be pliable,
Softened hearts speak lovely words,
Wised brains teach unlearned thoughts,
Crucial becomes useless steam,
Life becomes a dream to dream,
I am going to fish in the ocean of passion,
Where I can find multitude dream,
To get the colored, I have to go deep,
While Big villains are on the top,
Mushroom fish are for the plates,
Garbage fish are not for sale,
Taken a fish for the supper the last,
My cute little fish is for the heart.
I am going earnestly for the fishing,
In the oceans of blue and nothing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 16 April 2012

A wonderful poem, like it, a great write.

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Johnathan Juarez 12 May 2012

quirky and full of life. love it

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Heather Wilkins 03 August 2013

a good write. I am going earnestly for the fishing in the oceans of blue and nothing.

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Dwayne Gordon 30 January 2013

Life becomes a dream to dream..... Brilliant work of art...

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Meera Panigrahi 09 September 2012

I am going to fish in the ocean of passion..... Lovely line

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Karen Sinclair 22 August 2012

The ratings on this piece as far as im concerned do not reflect how well this is written, it is so cleverly placed and perfectly put, you have a style which is very unique and i for one think it is marvellous and honest

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Roong S 19 July 2012

Wow..very beautiful! !

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