veeraiyah subbulakshmi


A Bait And I. - Poem by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

In the ocean of passion,
Reason has little liaison,
Fish abound, blink and twinkle,
Splash at the face to bloom and spring,
Constant chanting with airy bubbles,
Enter the nostrils to be pliable,
Softened hearts speak lovely words,
Wised brains teach unlearned thoughts,
Crucial becomes useless steam,
Life becomes a dream to dream,
I am going to fish in the ocean of passion,
Where I can find multitude dream,
To get the colored, I have to go deep,
While Big villains are on the top,
Mushroom fish are for the plates,
Garbage fish are not for sale,
Taken a fish for the supper the last,
My cute little fish is for the heart.
I am going earnestly for the fishing,
In the oceans of blue and nothing.


Comments about A Bait And I. by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (8/3/2013 12:55:00 PM)

    a good write. I am going earnestly for the fishing in the oceans of blue and nothing. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 1 Points Dwayne Gordon (1/30/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    Life becomes a dream to dream.....
    Brilliant work of art... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Meera Panigrahi (9/9/2012 8:14:00 AM)

    I am going to fish in the ocean of passion..... Lovely line (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (8/22/2012 4:13:00 AM)

    The ratings on this piece as far as im concerned do not reflect how well this is written, it is so cleverly placed and perfectly put, you have a style which is very unique and i for one think it is marvellous and honest (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Roongratt Srimanchantha (7/19/2012 2:06:00 AM)

    Wow..very beautiful! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Johnathan Juarez (5/12/2012 11:22:00 PM)

    quirky and full of life. love it (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,887 Points Dave Walker (4/16/2012 5:00:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem, like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 16, 2012



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