A Bad Month, A Bad Life Poem by Lily Espinosa

A Bad Month, A Bad Life

Rating: 3.0


Tangled
Entwined
Trapped
Helpless
Drowning
Reaching
Gasping
Clawing
Surfacing
Rising
Hoping
Wishing
Sinking
It's over.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Graham Leese 18 February 2005

Bad months come and go, i hope you can find happier months your 14 lines held my attention and had a good rhythm keep it up Graham

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