A Bad Dream Poem by Jessica Elizondo

A Bad Dream

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She goes outside to escape the yelling between her parents. She sits

down and begins to cry. She looks up at the stars and thinks of him.

Oh how she wants to be in his arms right now. She wants to tell him

everything but can't speak a word. She hides it inside and cries. She

begins to cry again and wipes away her tears. She looks back up to

see him standing there. She quickly dries her eyes and stands

up. 'Whats wrong, ' he says softly in her ear as he holds her

tight. 'Nothing, ' she says, ' just needed to come out here and think,

thats all.' They sit down together, 'come on now, ' he says, 'tell me

whats on your mind.' She looks up at him and a single tear slides down

her cheek. 'I never should have let you out of my heart, ' she says. 'I

never should have let you go, ' more tears fall. He looks at her and

dries her eyes and holds her tight, ' It's going to be ok, you did what

you felt was right, all you have to do now is let me go.' She looks up at

him and says, 'I can't let you go, ' 'And why is that? ' He says. 'Tears fill

her eyes once more, ' because.......because I still love you...' A silence

fills the clear night air, and his hold tightens and his shirt is wet from

her tears. He smiles and says, I never stooped loving you...............She

awakens to find a tear filled pillow, The memories of that dream would

haunt her forever, because she knows it will never be a reallity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blessing Nanier 03 August 2008

woah.i could visualize the dream.what a poem

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Serenity Prayer 03 August 2008

=( its so sad.. very well written though. i could visualize the whole thing. great write, sad story.

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Obed Akuma 04 August 2008

oh how does the heart yearn for that perfect and strengthening bond called love, nice episode, i almost dreamt reading it!

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Anna jonson 23 August 2008

waaw that's all i can say.......waaaaaaaaaaw

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Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

Wonderful imagery. Bien!

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Aijaz Asif 25 November 2008

a marvellous write and sure very touchy poem, you have a very good talent to make the feelings heidden in you poem...i loved it..thanks 10++++++ for this beautiful poem rgds asif

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

A very touchy beautiful poem, love it.

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Ian Singer 16 September 2008

wow how sad you are good write more

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<font color =fusha>Amy 14 September 2008

What a sad poem, but fantastic none the least. Well done.

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