A Bad Day Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Bad Day

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You may be stopped on the way
Friends and all may go away
Teacher may thrash you for home work
At home you will be punished for not using pork

These are all sign of bad start
Your friends may quarrel and part
No one may come near to you
This is nothing but true

The problems may come in sequence
There may soon follow the bad consequences
You may feel bad through out the day
You won’t be able concentrate or pay

Stop for a while and decide
You don’t feel shy and hide
Go and meet the friends if you find
They may be nice to you and very kind

There is not good or bad luck
Sometimes you are badly struck
You must choose the time very carefully
You may understand it later and fully

As an up coming kid you are just new
You must make vigorous move and renew
You may find it enterprising and due
The bad phase may be temporary like morning dews

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maulin Shah 03 August 2010

No one may come near to you This is nothing but true... no good r, bad day it is bad time....10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 August 2010

Bad days pass into good ones.Nice poem.

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 06 August 2010

floating like lotus sailing like a boat surfing like a sledge want to write, like you!

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Rinki Nandy 05 August 2010

i like the last line really....it's not a bad day after all......

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Dwi Utami 04 August 2010

Bad day and beautiful day. You must enjoeyd all of day. Say not to bad day.. Just one..hope you never have bad day daily..: thumb: 10

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Darshna Chopra 04 August 2010

You may be stopped on the way Friends and all may go away Teacher may thrash you for home work.. it may happen some day also....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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