A Bad Day Poem by Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet

A Bad Day

Rating: 4.6


On a bad day the world seems...
Smaller
Duller
Meaningless
Cruel
Judgemental
Hateful
When that day is over I see its...
Bigger
Better
Colourful
Meaningful
Compassionate
Loving
Stay away bad days
and bring on great days.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 14 May 2013

stay away bad days and bring on great days. great write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Nader Baheri 14 May 2013

a bad day starts with a bad event.then we see the bad events happen repeatedly.but a good day is completely vice versa.just its about being negative or positive. cheers~nb

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Sekharan Pookkat 14 May 2013

Make all days good. Think good Do good And make your days colourful

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Owain Glyn 14 May 2013

If it's only a day we can get over it, it's when it's perpetual it's time to worry!

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Patricia Grantham 14 May 2013

Hello fellow Poet, Nobody loves a bad day, unfortunately all days cannot be good otherwise we would have a perfect life. Life is not perfect we have to accept the bad as well as the good. A lovely poem and very sensible. Thanks for the invite.

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Angela Wybrow 20 May 2013

Very true! Well observed! Great poem and to the point!

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 May 2013

Good one. Keep writing.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 May 2013

Hmm a lovely poem and u ended it finely. Ah atlast i cud coment.

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Antonio Liao 14 May 2013

a lifeline speed of existence resemble in your lines....excellent piece for our national Library...a 10 /10

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Ambrosia A 14 May 2013

So very true. I liked it. In reality we can't avoid bad days, we must pray for lesser bad days or strength to withstand it.

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