yoonoos peerbocus

Rookie - 194 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Baby's View Of Abortion - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

I came as tomorrow
Swaddled in innocence
To your warm womb
Without your choice
Or mine
Destined to up date
With time
Our human tree
But before love
Grew into flesh and words
What is unfinished creation-
A precipitation of blood
Became my transcendence.

Comments about A Baby's View Of Abortion by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Rookie - 256 Points Daniel Omaya (11/30/2015 3:37:00 AM)

    Yoonoos, What is unfinished creation-
    A precipitation of blood
    Became my transcendence is actually a summary of a half-baked human being - flour and yeast removed prematurely before the baking process could be complete....thanks for this poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 768 Points Duncan Stephen (11/27/2015 5:03:00 PM)

    Very well written poem.Very emotional and thought provoking. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 90 Points Sharon Peeples (11/23/2015 8:57:00 AM)

    A very beautiful write about very un-beautiful subject. Well written. ~Sharon (Report) Reply

    Rookie - 194 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (11/27/2015 1:46:00 AM)

    thank you have a nice day

  • Rookie - 220 Points Linda Hepner (10/22/2015 6:59:00 PM)

    Hi Yoonoos after a long break. It's a searing subject. The older I get the more horrific it becomes. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,008 Points * Sunprincess * (8/9/2015 3:20:00 PM)

    ....excellent write...beautifully written ★ (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,537 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (7/5/2015 7:28:00 AM)

    Great piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,183 Points T Tango (6/11/2015 6:40:00 PM)

    So very true, the sad thing is these women don't know what they do.
    I have written a poem on this subject my self.
    Tango. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points James Crieta (6/2/2015 12:51:00 AM)

    T remember Edgar Allan Poe in this write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,241 Points Allotey Abossey (5/22/2015 2:28:00 AM)

    Excellent piece of work, God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 164 Points Michael Gale (5/16/2015 4:44:00 PM)

    Awesomely to the point and imagried excellence in point! :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,223 Points Bharati Nayak (3/21/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    A poignantly beautiful poem.A Baby's view of Abortion is really a question mark to a mother who is aborting either out of choice or under forceful circumstances.It is as well a question mark to the person who has fathered the baby and to the society at large putting pressure for the abortion.Whose fault it is? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 421 Points Shania K. Younce (3/13/2014 11:07:00 PM)

    This is a good poem. I don't approve of abortions! ! ! Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Zeenat Fatima (11/21/2012 5:32:00 AM)

    touchy poem.. Beautifully explained the baby's story.. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,537 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (11/15/2012 8:48:00 AM)

    Very moving piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (10/24/2012 10:00:00 AM)

    However, only the parents can decide if they want to have that baby or not, and not an old man, old woman or a growing boy who is standing on the street where I pass and have the sign against the abortion. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie A B (10/16/2012 6:13:00 AM)

    awesome poem...beautifully depicted in words (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,665 Points Valsa George (9/13/2012 9:19:00 PM)

    Small, but poignant! The anguish of 'un finished creation' beautifully expressed! !

    I invite you to read my poem - Betrayal, if time permits! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,008 Points * Sunprincess * (9/6/2012 6:32:00 PM)

    awesome poem...I wish we could post this one on the roadside billboards across america.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Auwal Abdullahi (8/31/2012 2:18:00 PM)

    I am afraid it could be Shakespeare himself writing here. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eman Obied (7/31/2012 12:44:00 PM)

    wow.heatfelt very powerful yet so soft (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 14, 2012

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