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(05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

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A baby's view of abortion

I came as tomorrow
Swaddled in innocence
To your warm womb
Mother……
Without your choice
Or mine
Destined to up date
With time
Our human tree
But before love
Grew into flesh and words
What is unfinished creation-
A precipitation of blood
Became my transcendence.

Submitted: Tuesday, March 27, 2007
Edited: Saturday, July 14, 2012


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  • Shania K. Younce (3/13/2014 11:07:00 PM)

    This is a good poem. I don't approve of abortions! ! ! Bien!

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  • Zeenat Fatima (11/21/2012 5:32:00 AM)

    touchy poem.. Beautifully explained the baby's story..

  • Sally Plumb Plumb (11/15/2012 8:48:00 AM)

    Very moving piece of work.

  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (10/24/2012 10:00:00 AM)

    However, only the parents can decide if they want to have that baby or not, and not an old man, old woman or a growing boy who is standing on the street where I pass and have the sign against the abortion.

  • A B (10/16/2012 6:13:00 AM)

    awesome poem...beautifully depicted in words

  • Valsa George (9/13/2012 9:19:00 PM)

    Small, but poignant! The anguish of 'un finished creation' beautifully expressed! !

    I invite you to read my poem - Betrayal, if time permits!

  • * Sunprincess * (9/6/2012 6:32:00 PM)

    awesome poem...I wish we could post this one on the roadside billboards across america.. :)

  • Auwal Abdullahi (8/31/2012 2:18:00 PM)

    I am afraid it could be Shakespeare himself writing here. Great poem.

  • Eman Obied (7/31/2012 12:44:00 PM)

    wow.heatfelt very powerful yet so soft

  • Olumide Omoyele (7/30/2012 4:33:00 AM)

    touching poem...well put

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