yoonoos peerbocus

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A Baby's View Of Abortion - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

I came as tomorrow
Swaddled in innocence
To your warm womb
Without your choice
Or mine
Destined to up date
With time
Our human tree
But before love
Grew into flesh and words
What is unfinished creation-
A precipitation of blood
Became my transcendence.

Comments about A Baby's View Of Abortion by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Kim Barney (1/1/2016 10:59:00 PM)

    I thought I had read this poem before, but it didn't seem familiar. Someone else must have one with a similar title. It is very well done, however. I really enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Thabani Khumalo Thabani Khumalo (12/26/2015 5:43:00 AM)

    But before love
    Grew into flesh and words
    What is unfinished creation-
    A precipitation of blood
    Became my transcendence.
    yoonoos peerbocus (Report) Reply

  • Derek Azazel Morningstar Derek Azazel Morningstar (12/15/2015 11:27:00 AM)

    Interesting, I loved the imagery. It was short but packed a powerful punch in a soft and delicate way (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Omaya Daniel Omaya (11/30/2015 3:37:00 AM)

    Yoonoos, What is unfinished creation-
    A precipitation of blood
    Became my transcendence is actually a summary of a half-baked human being - flour and yeast removed prematurely before the baking process could be complete....thanks for this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Duncan Stephen (11/27/2015 5:03:00 PM)

    Very well written poem.Very emotional and thought provoking. (Report) Reply

  • Sharon Peeples (11/23/2015 8:57:00 AM)

    A very beautiful write about very un-beautiful subject. Well written. ~Sharon (Report) Reply

    Yoonoos Peerbocus (11/27/2015 1:46:00 AM)

    thank you have a nice day

  • Linda Hepner Linda Hepner (10/22/2015 6:59:00 PM)

    Hi Yoonoos after a long break. It's a searing subject. The older I get the more horrific it becomes. (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (8/9/2015 3:20:00 PM)

    ....excellent write...beautifully written ★ (Report) Reply

  • Sally Plumb Plumb (7/5/2015 7:28:00 AM)

    Great piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • T Tango T Tango (6/11/2015 6:40:00 PM)

    So very true, the sad thing is these women don't know what they do.
    I have written a poem on this subject my self.
    Tango. (Report) Reply

  • James Crieta (6/2/2015 12:51:00 AM)

    T remember Edgar Allan Poe in this write. (Report) Reply

  • Allotey Abossey (5/22/2015 2:28:00 AM)

    Excellent piece of work, God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Michael Gale Michael Gale (5/16/2015 4:44:00 PM)

    Awesomely to the point and imagried excellence in point! :) (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (3/21/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    A poignantly beautiful poem.A Baby's view of Abortion is really a question mark to a mother who is aborting either out of choice or under forceful circumstances.It is as well a question mark to the person who has fathered the baby and to the society at large putting pressure for the abortion.Whose fault it is? (Report) Reply

  • Shania K. Younce Shania K. Younce (3/13/2014 11:07:00 PM)

    This is a good poem. I don't approve of abortions! ! ! Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Zeenat Fatima (11/21/2012 5:32:00 AM)

    touchy poem.. Beautifully explained the baby's story.. (Report) Reply

  • Sally Plumb Plumb (11/15/2012 8:48:00 AM)

    Very moving piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Lasoaphia Quxazs Lasoaphia Quxazs (10/24/2012 10:00:00 AM)

    However, only the parents can decide if they want to have that baby or not, and not an old man, old woman or a growing boy who is standing on the street where I pass and have the sign against the abortion. (Report) Reply

  • A B (10/16/2012 6:13:00 AM)

    awesome poem...beautifully depicted in words (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (9/13/2012 9:19:00 PM)

    Small, but poignant! The anguish of 'un finished creation' beautifully expressed! !

    I invite you to read my poem - Betrayal, if time permits! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 14, 2012

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