# A B A N D O N E D Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A B A N D O N E D

Rating: 2.9


i miss that normal life
i once led
abandoned by one and all
i try and keep this 'BIGNESS'
in me alive
in spite of the bitterness brewing within

i do not make any moves
the stubby fingers of fate does it for me
in spite of an awareness about the falseness
of the situation
the pain the situation gives
is very real

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Voidness makes room for Bigness to accept ‘Greatest Big’ ‘in spite of an awareness about the falseness’ you endorse it ‘…pain the situation gives/is very real’… Yeah real…but double endorsement and its Wisdom And with you ‘Greatest Big’ feeling the same reality…indeed paradoxical 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kesav Easwaran 02 May 2010

reflective and poignant...well written piece...10

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mohsin amin khan 21 April 2010

abandoned nice poem written by you showing how you feel the gretest emotions inside keep it up yaar

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Tsira Gogeshvili 18 April 2010

samanyan, Is very fine...I like firmness of soul here..10... Tsira

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