(a) 6 (Love/Passion) A Sensuous Dream Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
(a) 6 (Love/Passion) A Sensuous Dream
I was drunk with the sobriety of my love
Wandering with a passion of a possessed soul
Swimming in the azure waters of my wonderous cove
Thought that I had discovered love that was whole
In your light, the rays that touched me set me ablaze
Torching a flame in my heart, urging a song
To give, to surrender, to live forever in this love haze
And to live in this radiant light for as long
as the fire crackled in this warm universe
and the monsoon made love to this thirsty earth
Drenched in this ecstasy, I let the beauty dance
Unleashing a rapturous force that shook my soul
Breathing new life in me with just one of your glance
Words pouring out to celebrate this romance
In this dawn of hope, he came with a searing kiss
And woke me up from this languid dream
where I had got lost in the timeless bliss
Now completely awake, dazzled by the sunbeams
Groping in the darkness of my subconscious
All I remembered, t'was a dream...so sensuous
Queen, you are 'the poetry queen'...this is so amazing, very well written too, never gets boring, i didn't lose interest in it and the words lead me right through your dream! Preets
YOU GO T. O.>>>>Passion perfect Poem, my dear....Solid Write'''''''''''''''FJR
Loved it - really passionate and so well put together - Steve
very deeply emotional poem written very beautifully...loved it TO...love...nalini
My Response TO: A Sensuous Dream It ai’nt easy, just to get high within the soberness of love; Like meandering with the obsession of a crazed spirit! While floating on the blue waters off her amazing bay – Thinking, that she has finally realized the complete love! Now, he radiantly glows from the depth of his vibrant heart; And enlightens those fabled revelry in her famished heart! Now, she sings that soulful song from her blazing heart; And wishes to capitulate and be immortal within his love! Just to be immortal, is her wish forever within his radiance; And, immortal within the universe just like the fire or the rain! It was her rapture & elation, as she let her splendor dance; With strength, she gives this free rein to her ecstatic spirit! Fully reincarnated she had felt, as he rested his eyes on her; Thus, she rejoiced the lexis & showered with the carousing! For her, it was a sunup of anticipation, as she felt his kiss; Then she realized that it was just only in her indolent dream! Now, she reclaimed her mind trapped in this eternal ecstasy Awakened and astounded, there she is now facing daylight; Just to remember this dream, yet alive in the depth of her sleep!
indeed very 'sensuous' and appealing... intoxicated with love...an amazing opening line...
This is absolutely beautiful Tranquil, a very emotional and senuous poem-loved it--Melvina
You have shown all the light and colour of your beautiful words Amazing write Love duncan X
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Drunk on your dream, T O - this is masterful. It carries the reader away. t x