(a) 57 (Love/Passion) I Just Want To Keep Looking At You Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 57 (Love/Passion) I Just Want To Keep Looking At You

Rating: 5.0


I just want to keep looking at you
What have you done to me, baby?
Your smile quenches my inner thirst
The spark in your eye lights up my being

I feel alive
Like a germinating seed after a winter freeze
I feel light
Like a butterfly kissing the blushing blossoms
I feel beautiful
Like the full moon getting slowly uncovered
I feel complete
Like the parched earth after a thunderous rain

I am almost afraid to touch you
Lest my dream come to an end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 12 June 2007

Ah but the dream could never end........ I like this for so many reasons....the style is structured well... it flows with an atmosphere of true delight... and the end is perfected puchlined..... top grades on this one......

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Original Unknown Girl 07 June 2007

This is gorgeous TO, the imagery is sublime.... Sigh! what a stunning poem! HG: -) xx

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Danny Reynolds 07 June 2007

Inside the bubble of bliss. euphoric yet afraid, the promise of the kiss, but what price might be payed? Lovely TO Danny

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 June 2007

Very Romantic Tranquil... Done with Style Lady...10

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Edna Javelosa 07 June 2007

what a romantic poem...i loved it..i liked the last two lines..this poem deserves a super 10.

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