(a) 42 (Love/Passion) Drunk Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 42 (Love/Passion) Drunk

Rating: 4.9


Words hovering around the fringes of my mind
Refusing to emerge out
All coiled up, frozen and entwined
Have been sitting for hours in this drought
My page is empty
Damn!
Can only write when I am drunk
Drunk on your love
Drunk on you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Neville 24 August 2006

I understand :) ~ worse when the page is empty and you're sober ~kelly

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Duncan Wyllie 31 August 2006

Being drunk is one think But being in a drunk like state from another can be quiet different You tell your poems with such depth Love duncan X

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Preeti - is here! 24 August 2006

drunk on you, i mean thats when you see life right? thats when life begins.. another nice thought here. Preets

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 August 2006

Then again have you ever mused the reversal possibilities of LOVE FIRST & then write a Poem inspired by your encounter, recite it out loud...AND THEN DRINK TO YOUR SUCCESS! LOL.....Great WRITE T.O.'''''''''''''''FJR

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Nalini Hebbar 24 August 2006

words of love blocked? ...get drunk with you...wow that's so passionate...love...nalini

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Geoff Warden 24 August 2006

Drunk on Love.............has its own language unspoken......great rite.

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