Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(A) 42 (LOVE/PASSION) DRUNK


Words hovering around the fringes of my mind
Refusing to emerge out
All coiled up, frozen and entwined
Have been sitting for hours in this drought
My page is empty
Damn!
Can only write when I am drunk
Drunk on your love
Drunk on you

Submitted: Thursday, August 24, 2006
Edited: Friday, August 27, 2010

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  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (8/31/2006 9:29:00 AM)

    Being drunk is one think
    But being in a drunk like state from another can be quiet different
    You tell your poems with such depth
    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Preeti - is here! (8/24/2006 10:55:00 PM)

    drunk on you, i mean thats when you see life right? thats when life begins..

    another nice thought here.

    Preets (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 8,157 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (8/24/2006 4:49:00 PM)

    Then again have you ever mused the reversal possibilities of LOVE FIRST & then
    write a Poem inspired by your encounter, recite it out loud...AND THEN DRINK TO YOUR SUCCESS! LOL.....Great WRITE T.O.'''''''''''''''FJR (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nalini Hebbar (8/24/2006 10:15:00 AM)

    words of love blocked? ...get drunk with you...wow that's so passionate...love...nalini (Report) Reply

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