(a) 41 (Love/Passion) My Heart Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 41 (Love/Passion) My Heart

Rating: 3.4


Knocking the doors
Of my senses
My heart soars....

Urgent whispers, getting crisper
Beckoning, calling
My heart stirs...

Voices from past life?
Heart pierced by his knife
My heart cries....

Open the Door
Whats in store
My heart roars....

Oh God, whats that?
Bolt the doors
My heart combats....

I cant be yours
Let me be.
My heart implores....

In peace
That my plea
My heart is on lease...

Lets open the gates
To our next lifetime
My heart waits...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

'My heart is on lease' - what an utterly superb way of putting this. Your heart is a big and welcoming and deserving one, methinks. Finely penned. t x

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Geoff Warden 29 August 2006

A very well written poem.................

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Nalini Hebbar 29 August 2006

this is really good TO...one of your best i should say...well written and has a great flow...love...nalini

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Catastrophe King 30 August 2007

My Response TO: My Heart I was tapping on my angst memories in vain; Oh! Her senses awakened & heart mounted! I mellifluously murmured in mislaid thoughts; I wonder how her forlorn heart had the stir! I had truly stubbed the voices of my bygone; I am surprised, how my knife stabbed a heart. She now remains confused between thresholds; Combating her felon heart with a plea and cry! Confused remains her self, wanting just to be; And, believing in the rebirth of my expired soul!

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Geoff Warden 15 May 2007

One could never tier of this well construted read.....

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Preeti - is here! 10 September 2006

Ummm, this isn't my personal best from your poems, but i love the concept and the structure. Preets

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Duncan Wyllie 01 September 2006

This pulls the reader in and kept up the flow throughout Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 30 August 2006

I love the 'three' line stanzas, very cleverly written. Delightful to peruse. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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