(a) 39 (Love/Passion) Dream Blessings Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 39 (Love/Passion) Dream Blessings

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Last night I dreamt of you
Continuing what we couldnt complete
Our salivas intermingling
Lips travelling from head to feet
Mmmm...whole body tingling
Bare on the sheet
Our souls singing....
You, the hunter
And I, the prey
And then
The prey becomes the hunter
Satiating our hunger
But the bodies are not enough
Our thirst goes deep
To dive into the soul
To make each other complete
Where its pure and divine
We dont feel the heat
Happy in our respective shrines
We are floating
amidst pristine white clouds
Thousands of angels
Come out and enshroud
Showering us with rose petals
And we are endowed
With their blessings.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R H 26 December 2006

A dreamy picture of love and longing...beautifully crafted. Justine

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Patricia Gale 26 December 2006

A very passionate piece, the body and the souls unite then blessed by angels, what could be better!

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Jim Foulk 10 February 2007

a very beautiful piece of poetry.

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Catastrophe King 01 January 2007

Standing on the edge of the balcony of the famous Qutub Minar; I looked out for you...... for an amzing poetess is afraid to come-out in front and claim the trophies and accolades that await her...... truly sensous, exotic and hmmmmmmmmm.. what a welcome treat for me! hahahaha

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 December 2006

You say Mmmmm.....I say Hmmmmmm! lol! T.O.>>>You do own the passionate skills to Pen the sensual....Afine job, here, as per usual....striking pictorial & well constructed crafting... ~ f.j.r. ~

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Diane Violet 26 December 2006

A deep passion felt in this piece, wonderfully written. All the best, Diane

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Geoff Warden 26 December 2006

The passion in this piece flows well o'er the falls of poetic imagery, Well delivered...TO

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