(a) 38 (Love/Passion) You And I Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 38 (Love/Passion) You And I

Rating: 2.9


Flooding streams
Soaring wings
Musical dreams
Passion sings
Vivid blue sky
You and I

Scented breeze
Undulating hills
Swaying trees
Height that thrills
Swinging high
You and I

Dripping chocolate
Luscious grapes
Candlelight date
Behind the drapes
Clothes fly
You and I

Sensual delights
Skin on skin
Reaching new heights
Deep within
Hoarse cries
You and I

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 09 June 2007

a very passionate poem.I think you are a very passionate lover. I love this poem, simple and beautiful.

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 25 April 2007

Wow, you express yourself so well...(lol) ..but honestly that is just a beautiful poem that gets you caught up in the whole thing...which in this case can not be a bad thing ((smile)) ! Once again amazing imagery... Keep up the great work Tranquil. Take care of U, =Shelley=

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Soaring through the journey... each word perfectly, skilfully selected. Grand work TO. t x

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Linda Ori 02 March 2007

My kinda scenerio, TO! But you forgot the strawberries and champaign! Nice delicious piece of writing. Linda

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