As real as air, earth and water
As real as a lovers fight
As real as teh laughter
Of a child in delight....
As real as the expanse of the sea
As real what lurks underneath
As real as the lovers glee
Of an unexpected rendevous....
Come and touch my heart
And make me real
Gaze into the depth of my soul
Make it sublime and surreal....
Passionate and longing piece. I can imagine this piece being sited to a lover before the moment of true desire and love meet.... well done!
And on that find read..................hmhmhmhmhmhmhm...........TENsion mounting.............well done T>O>
TELL YA WHATS REAL.....YOUR WORK & THE EFFORT THAT OBVIOUSLY GOES INTO ITS MAKINGS.....SOLID WRITE, T.O. F. j. R.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
apart from the one typo 'teh' which should read 'the'..the poem is flawless and amazing!