(a) 12 (Love/Passion) As Real As... Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 12 (Love/Passion) As Real As...

Rating: 3.2


As real as air, earth and water
As real as a lovers fight
As real as teh laughter
Of a child in delight....

As real as the expanse of the sea
As real what lurks underneath
As real as the lovers glee
Of an unexpected rendevous....

Come and touch my heart
And make me real
Gaze into the depth of my soul
Make it sublime and surreal....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 30 May 2007

apart from the one typo 'teh' which should read 'the'..the poem is flawless and amazing!

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Patricia Gale 18 January 2007

Passionate and longing piece. I can imagine this piece being sited to a lover before the moment of true desire and love meet.... well done!

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Geoff Warden 17 January 2007

And on that find read..................hmhmhmhmhmhmhm...........TENsion mounting.............well done T>O>

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 January 2007

TELL YA WHATS REAL.....YOUR WORK & THE EFFORT THAT OBVIOUSLY GOES INTO ITS MAKINGS.....SOLID WRITE, T.O. F. j. R.

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