(905) Steal Away Poem by Melvina Germain

(905) Steal Away

Rating: 3.2


Lovers stroll barefoot on the sandy
beach hand in hand. Cool winds
sensually blowing through curls of
silky black hair.

Chill of night slowly approaching,
warmth of love forever young.
Holding each other close, tenderly
stealing breathless kisses.
Passers-by glanced with envied wishes.

Nightfall came, into dawn they walked,
laughing, giggling, playing in the sand.
Standing with arms caressing each other.
Gazing amorously into love-filled eyes.
Silhouettes under the darkened sky.

The end of this romantic stroll draws nigh,
soon time to bid each other good-bye.
A slight feeling of sadness appears,
knowing next time may be several years.

Looking at each other with tear filled eyes,
muffled sounds of sweet good-byes.
Slowly pulling away from one another,
a slight touch of hand on hand.
Goodbye my love, we’ll meet again.
Until then, we must remain friends.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kurt Rees 20 February 2007

very well written, but another sad ending! lol you write like me! ! great work!

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James James 30 October 2006

Melvina....is this you in the poem...on the beach. There is bittersweet nostalgia as if each recognise that parting is their lot in life. Very sensitive without being mawkish....B

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Tailor Bell 29 October 2006

this is very romantic, Melvina. you spry heartbreaker, you...ha...beautiful scene and wonderful flow right to the heartfelt ending. memorable read. -Tailor

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 October 2006

Ahhhhh! Viva La Romance....C'est la Vie, mon ami...Tres Bon, Madamoiselle M. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Nimal Dunuhinga 21 October 2006

This adorable love story steals our hearts. An attractive word painting Melvina. Good byes are always sad it seems?

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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