9. Breathing “between” Two Worlds Poem by Abha Sharma

Wonderful poem... it exposes the dilemma faced by us all..how right is it to enjoy whn others suffer but most us end up ignoring it n live in a illusion rather than face ourselves!

When I sleep I see clearly remains of done up fish in the immensity of sky Beautiful pigmentation in otherwise bland but very present spectre of guilt Shabash Abha

I like your manner of writing … and it in a verse you originally underline that people remembered others, … (and about rich which too sincere «a help hand …» though «Whenever» only the god with can 'think' …sincere

This Journey we are all upon, is not easy one, some dropp out hardly before it's begun, others go on and on, we are given this gift no matter how short or long, no need for guilt or tears, just remember those that went before us and hold them dear... Andy 10

Hello poet friend and this poem is perfect. Great work, I'm honored to have someone like you read and review my poems. Thanks for sharing, LC

dear abhaji, your words will follow everyone until death.... poet is a someone sentensed for life... you punished me while i am a freebird...

Beautiful. 10+ for it.

This is just too good..the breathing between two worlds..how sensitive and how depressing...you have a way with words...it was lovely! Best wishes, Gul

you write magic abha... and you write about such strong emotions... so true.. hats off to you......! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

really nicely written...with sensitivity and feeling.. best wishes, mehreen