793. Tug Of War 211208 Poem by Raman Savithiri

793. Tug Of War 211208

Rating: 4.4


As earth turns towards the Sun
The ups and downs are well seen
When night falls with null Moon
Dark hides the true sight soon.

As mind awakens to sensible logic
The do-s and don’t-s appear realistic
When desire rises with heart’s panic
Ignorance overrides brains as magic!

The Self patiently pulls me inside
The self hastily pushes me outside
As Earth is bound to day and night
I am tossed amid self and Self might! 211208

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ridge Cahill 12 January 2009

Well crafted and wonderful write! !

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Ency Bearis 28 December 2008

nice theme..a self conflict with alternative solutions..good write...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 December 2008

a war within- true read my me & me..thanks for sharing-10

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Raman Savithiri

Raman Savithiri

Coimbatore, Tamil Nadu, India
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