712 Days Poem by Laura Milner

712 Days

Rating: 3.5


You picked up my heart carelessly
and, with a needle and thread
your shaking hands
decided which path you'd take

our fate was already decided
you knew what you planned to do
despite your discomfort
you dragged me around the ankles
and didn't stop until you found something new

i held your hand tight throughout everything
i wanted to believe you'd found new ways
but at the end, just like the start
you proved yourself no different
to back how you were in those days

Wednesday, October 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 08 October 2014

Sad! Loved the caption. The poem expresses the feelings well enough to be understood by all.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 October 2014

nice drop.loved its flow and simplicity.

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