(616) Depresslion (Acrostic) Poem by Melvina Germain

(616) Depresslion (Acrostic)

Rating: 2.9


Deep in the darkest part of your heart
Every beat seems to be a trying slow start
Pride and victory have no place here
Reasonable thoughts are placed on the back burner
Every breath difficult and heavy
Seasons all remain the same, cold, dark and gloomy
Stereotypical behaviour is quite apparent
In the quiet darkness you reside
On a deep running slow train
Never, yes it never seems like you’ll come back again

Written: Jan.18,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 28 February 2008

Mel, this sounds a lot like me on my bad days. Great poem though. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Roger Cornish 19 January 2008

I'll give it a 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Melvina 'cos it's very good! RogerxXxXx

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JoAnn McGrath 18 January 2008

Right with you on this one Mel....two steps forward and three slips back...faith is the only thing that keeps me going somedays....thank goodness for that: O)

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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