(590) Breaking News-Act Of God (Haiku) Poem by Melvina Germain

(590) Breaking News-Act Of God (Haiku)

Rating: 3.3


Hailstones fiercely hit
Roofs of homes take huge beating
Many fear act of God

Written: Oct.15/06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 29 November 2006

Excellence expressed in a few stark lines. A terse reminder that man does not control the weather. You are definately a poet worthy of the name. Regards, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 23 November 2006

Showing a strong respect for the powers of nature, The lord holds us all within his hands we should show an even greater respect for him Many thanks Love duncan X

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Tailor Bell 20 November 2006

I love the clipped phrasing almost as if recalling breaking headlines...the kind you go back and read, that occurred just before a greater tragedy. great read, Melvina. -Tailor

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Patricia Gale 18 November 2006

Well done Melvina!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 November 2006

Rivoting ' KU, my dear..& we've all bore witness to this, haven't we? ...fjr

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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