513094 Poem by robin machorro

513094



laying on the grass breathless

you

looking at the clouds

me

only looking at you, smileing to see your eyes

warmth from your hugs, something i cant even explain

happy here with you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iron Panda 23™ 26 May 2010

this i likesss....beautiful & reaaalyy nice imagery (: & this made me happy somehow xP

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Elias Barcelona 23 May 2010

It paint a beautiful picture, really makes you drift off to a time when you had someone special. Its very touching

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Elias Barcelona 23 May 2010

It paints a beautiful picture, it really makes you drift off to a time when you had someone special. Its very touching

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Ash Moore (NEW POEM!) 23 May 2010

This was so simple and to the point, but still a little mysterious in it's own way. I liked it.

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