Ray Quesada

Veteran Poet - 1,073 Points (08-08-1986)

50-Card Steve - Poem by Ray Quesada

There goes 3-card Mike
with all he can fight
when he left yesterday
he shoulda went right

And theres 5-card Billy
with 7-card Jack
they both get silly
smokin' that crack

And Alabama Chuck
has been down on his luck
he shoulda played Razz
instead of 7-card Stud

But they all have something in common
when they all pack up and leave-
They never had a clue
while playin' with 50-card Steve,
that he always had you
with that Ace up his sleeve.

Comments about 50-Card Steve by Ray Quesada

  • Rookie - 365 Points Guy Lip-more (1/8/2013 2:31:00 PM)

    I agree with the comments from Red O' mara, sounds like a film advert. Good write, enjoyed. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 146 Points Red O'mara (12/5/2012 1:04:00 AM)

    Reads as though it should have been that sort of movie that can only come out of America. You could build a chapter around each of these verses. Great pictures. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 4, 2012

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