5 Senses Poem by Kaylee Questionable

5 Senses

Rating: 5.0


Sweet nothings
is all I want to hear
Your arm around me
is all I want to feel
Your sweat
is all I want to smell
Your smile
is all I want to see
Your candy flavored mouth
Is all I want to taste
I want to wake up
in your billowy sheets

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Stertz 09 November 2008

OK, pick you around...say 8? Just kidding...it's a nice poem. Cool idea, going through each one of the senses like that, then adding how you want it to relate to the love experience. Good read.

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Ben Gieske 22 August 2009

Your repetition is effective.

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*Trusting You* 08 December 2008

I want so many of those too with my man but he is so far away. like April said short and sweet good job. Crystal

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Short and Sweet! Great JOB

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Drake Kinkaid 10 November 2008

I really like it You have a way with your words

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 November 2008

Finely penned! a 10 for this poem.

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