(-) 5 (My Love) Just A Preparation Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(-) 5 (My Love) Just A Preparation

Rating: 5.0


My bleeding tears
become a dewdropp in the verdant lawns of paradise
My festering wounds
transform magically into a sunkissed vista of radiance
My exhausted feet
dance to celebrate the eternal journey with You
My heaving heart
sings a rapturous symphony to welcome You
My weary soul
gets a divine elevation getting merged with Yours

My entire life till now was just a preparation
For a cosmic union with You

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 18 July 2007

Nicely balanced poem which celebrates the divinity of souls conjunction. Pity PH continues to add an extra 'p' to 'drop' isn't it. Rgds, Ivan

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Subbaraman N V 02 April 2008

..............................leading to the ultimate!

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Asma Bahrainwala 01 September 2007

this is a beautiful poem, TO... I like the way you have expressed this feeling of the whole life culminating into this just one experience... Asma...

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Preeti - is here! 08 August 2007

This one's just fab....you get better with every poem! !

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Patricia Gale 19 July 2007

Beautiful work, ah amore tis grand... Wonderful penning T.O.

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Gonna' haf' ta' change yir name, lass...from Tranquil Ocean to Vibrant Riptide! lol! The imagery here commands like a tidal wave, indeed...Just was passing through, & thought i'd visit a friend for a moment (that be you) ... Anyway...(- 5) LOVE is a + 10! ~ ~ ~

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