5 Lines Poem by D.J. Ray

5 Lines

Rating: 3.0


5 lines
cut in my skin
as if with red ink

5 lines
long and deep
bleed out my pain
the loss they keep

5 lines
leave a scar
see what happens
when you push me to far

5 lines
the scars fade
hysteria is all that gives notice
to these five lines

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x x
x----x
x x
x----x
x x

5 lines
symbol of life
a life which i laugh at
a living death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
21 Guns 13 June 2011

yeah i like this one a lot. (only difference with me is i do two lines, lol)

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Solibella Tello-gonzalez 21 January 2011

Dam that makes me think about a lot of stuff I've seen. It's reallly good

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Courtney Wills 21 September 2010

Raw, honest, and pure. It describes every emotion in simplicity. I really like it.

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D.J. Ray

D.J. Ray

Jonesboro AR
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