.5. Calamine No Pal O Mine Poem by David Threadgold

.5. Calamine No Pal O Mine

Rating: 5.0


Twisting turning sunshine burning
Blistered back and never learning
Had a notion using lotion
Could have saved so much commotion

Calamine used like distemper
Couldn’t ease unwanted temper
Tried to sit couldn’t sleep
Twisting turning burns so deep

In the morning brothers, sisters
Scratching at big angry blisters
Calamine put on in dabs
Turning blisters into scabs

Putting on a clean white shirt
Can’t complain how much it hurt
Painful itching had to scratch
Bleeding scab left bloody patch

Swearing oaths we each had learnt
Come next year to not get burnt
Summer ends by late September
And come next year we’ll not remember


© 2008 David Threadgold
Rambling Riddles & Rhymes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 17 September 2008

We never quite learn our lesson every year it is the same old story? This is a very funny true poem.

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Anand Dixit 16 September 2008

Very well written and funny...score 10

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